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Michael Cooper's avatar

By the time I was done reading the poems and your essay, I was a big, gooey-warm mess, like a perfectly toasted marshmallow. Thank you for semi-liquifaction. Particularly, your paragraph which begins, "We got out of the car..." hit me like that sonic and seismic quake you describe. By the end, I believe my chin was found resting on my desk, mouth above it, still wide open somehow. I know, exactly, that feeling, that awe. I was there with you and longing to be there with you. My pile of molten gooh slumping inconveniently next to you and GF, frothing in the wind like the brine below.

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dhd's avatar

"we're getting ahead of ourselves" - thank you for taking us back to the moment when our eyes open wide and our hearts open wider.

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